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这文章水平太高了,膜拜大佬。真的不像是新手。
其实我觉得中间倒不快,结尾快了。全文的主题是向墨邪情复仇,按理来说她才应该是全篇的重头戏,若水只是个复仇道路上的过渡跳板。而从全文结构上来看并不是这样。即使认为轩辕若水和墨邪情是地位相当的双女主的话,若水的戏份也多出太多了,大概占了八成的样子,剩下两成才是墨邪情而可怜的墨邪情头尾两次出场都是匆匆结束,甚至在结尾前的点题篇章大高潮里被若水抢了戏,还没怎么玩就没了。有点头重脚轻,虎头蛇尾的感觉,不够尽兴
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